Here I was thrilled to finally be holding a physical of my novel, Bloodgifted, only to realise the font I'd chosen - Century Gothic - (despite it's name) is not suited to a work of fiction. Looks great if used to describe the mating habits of vampire bats with accompanying images, but not - I repeat - for a novel.
Who would have thought?!
To illustrate my point, here's an example of Century Gothic in action using a segment from my desperately-trying-to-get-released-novel.
She
stopped, released my arm and turned to face me. ‘Laura dear…’ she looked at me
pensively, ‘…I knew this time would come, but still it’s hard to know where to
begin, especially as –’ she paused, her face flushed, and her hands, which
lightly gripped my elbows, shook slightly, ‘– you’ll have difficulty believing
it. But nevertheless, all I’m about to tell you is the truth. Never doubt it.’
Well,
“curiouser and curiouser,” as Alice in
Wonderland remarked. As a child it had always been my favourite story –
that of an ordinary girl who suddenly finds herself in a strange and perplexing
world.
You can clearly see it doesn't work. The spacing was also wrong.
Now, here's the same example using Garamond 3, 1.5 spacing -
Aunt Judy and I walked
out the back entrance of the house and down the narrow brick-paved pathway that
led to a low stonewall separating the house from the Council owned park on the
other side. Opening the wooden back gate, she led me out and onto the quiet
path that ran alongside the gently coursing Cook’s River. A gentle breeze
sighed through the upper branches of the weeping willows that lined the sloping
bank, bringing the sweet scent of a summer evening to lazily drift around us.
She stopped, released
my arm and turned to face me. ‘Laura dear…’ she looked at me pensively, ‘…I
knew this time would come, but still it’s hard to know where to begin,
especially as –’ she paused, her face flushed, and her hands, which lightly
gripped my elbows, shook slightly, ‘– you’ll have difficulty believing it. But
nevertheless, all I’m about to tell you is the truth. Never doubt it.’
Well, “curiouser and
curiouser,” as Alice in Wonderland
remarked. As a child it had always been my favourite story – that of an
ordinary girl who suddenly finds herself in a strange and perplexing world.
Much better! I only wish I'd it known earlier and saved myself all this time and hassle. But, as the old adage says, experience is the best teacher.
I also decided to change the paper colour, from white to cream, as it's much kinder to the eyes.
There we have it. Live and learn! Now, I must wait another ten days for the CreateSpace people (who've been fantastic through all this) to complete my corrections and send me another physical copy of my book. And, hopefully, this time I can finally press that "Approve" button and my book will be available on Amazon three weeks after that.
Will I hear the Halleluia chorus when that happens? I bloody well hope so!
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